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Well said ladies, so all is clear now? I do believe so. And I thank you both for your comments & concern,Me

Yesterday, 4:58 PM
by Mikey_Dee

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Balance,A way to goI'll never lose again,I know that from now on and on,I'll win

Yesterday, 4:33 PM
by Mikey_Dee

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Free will choices bought intentionality unfolding wings for the moment ballance

Yesterday, 11:52 AM
by alexander rhubarb

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take hearttake hede for theweak becomes the strong nowfrom the chasms razor sharp edge free will

Yesterday, 8:16 AM
by Jordan

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Hi Megan, haiku take a lot of practise to achieve excellence, some of your haiku here are senyru, they should all have a season word, and two parts, they may be 1...

Sep 5, 3:21 PM
by Zephyr

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Healingseparation -compassion and love bridgethe wide chasms where fear takes  griptake heart  

Sep 5, 1:30 PM
by Zephyr

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Close me to reappear even more transparent open my wounds and let me bleed healing

Sep 4, 2:43 PM
by alexander rhubarb

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I thought this poem was really unique and the rhyming style was well done.  A technical comments:  In stanza three, it's hard to tell Eileen from "t...

Sep 4, 6:36 AM
by Megan

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I've sent some of my poetry that I wrote a year or two ago to several literary magazines.  I've heard back from some already and all in the negative. ...

Sep 4, 6:31 AM
by Megan

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RebornCoffee days andFear that one will pick youapart with dead accuracyClose me

Sep 4, 6:24 AM
by Megan