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Re: The Room
Showcase for finished poems. Well said ladies, so all is clear now? I do believe so. And I thank you both for your comments & concern,Me
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Re: Cinquain Train
Warm up Area Balance,A way to goI'll never lose again,I know that from now on and on,I'll win
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Re: Cinquain Train
Warm up Area Free will
choices bought
intentionality
unfolding wings for the moment
ballance
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Warm up Area take hearttake hede for theweak becomes the strong nowfrom the chasms razor sharp edge free will
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Re: Poetry
Hi Megan, haiku take a lot of practise to achieve excellence, some of your haiku here are senyru, they should all have a season word, and two parts, they may be 1...
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Re: Cinquain Train
Warm up Area Healingseparation -compassion and love bridgethe wide chasms where fear takes griptake heart
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Re: Cinquain Train
Warm up Area Close me
to reappear
even more transparent
open my wounds and let me bleed
healing
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Re: Eileen the Emu
I thought this poem was really unique and the rhyming style was well done. A technical comments: In stanza three, it's hard to tell Eileen from "t...
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Poetry
I've sent some of my poetry that I wrote a year or two ago to several literary magazines. I've heard back from some already and all in the negative. ...
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Re: Cinquain Train
Warm up Area RebornCoffee days andFear that one will pick youapart with dead accuracyClose me
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